A new original song!

[davidcook]

Heyy guys I'm new ong here, I was wondering what you guys on this forum think of my original song for a music school audition Hope you enjoy! feedback is appreciated.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=den_s2X7how

[Norm]

It feels really "rushed" and "out of breath" (for lack of a better word) to me but you're pointed in the right direction.

Not saying that out of meanness... just giving you feedback. It's only an opinion...

[Ray Bohlken]

I'd like to hear more, myself.
Ray

[Roger Pratt]

David....I for one think it is excellent and very pretty! You are quite a guitarist for such a young man. My compliments to you!!

[Norm]

David...

You never can tell how someone might take a comment and I didn't mean to sound as snarky as it might appear.

You've been "working it" and we all know that playing thumbstyle isn't an overnight acheivement.

I join the others in hoping you put up more stuff...doesn't have to be original... but just more of what you're doing...

Didn't mean to be hurtful...

[davidcook]

Thanks for the feedback guys! I'll post another song in a minute. And norm, i like all kinds Feedback yours tells me a other side but I was very nervous like with any vid i record, im working on it, dont worry

[Norm]

Re: "Nervous"

Boy do I know how that is! Someting about the 'record' light going on and what it does to best intentions...

I checked out your other stuff. You've been working on your thumb. As we all know that's the hardest but your efforts are paying off...

Stay on it.

[MitchC]

Totally enjoyed that ! Keep up the good work.Nice stuff. Post more.